Reviews for Hello, I Love You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LMFAO best story ever! just thought you should know |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm... wonder who the son her age could be? |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE! plz... i really love this story so far :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, good story! idk if you still have writers block, or your just not continuing the story, but if you do, some ideas... i don't have anything specific, but what you need is a problem in the story, that threatens their relationship or something... idk what exactly, but you had mentioned the guy who raped shay, and there was a guy in the parking lot the time blake was drunk, maybe you could incorporate that somehow... idk, just ideas. but it is a really good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beer? Darling, we drink B-52, Sex on the Beach, Absinthe and Champagne! But I guess we're just private school brats! D. Wait...IB program schools are prep schools, aren't they? Cause they should be, the amount of homework we get...Ridiculous! PS. I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I love this story so far. Love it :) You've got great characters, a clever storyline, and a refreshing style of writing. Keep up the amazing work, and update soon! ~Carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story is great just right what comes to mind , maybe one of lillys sons the older one is a real pain, or maybe something happens between blake and rayce think of something im sure it will be great. update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chappie, been waiting for an update since i don't know when XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter...I love it...I cant wait to see what happens next... hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Thank god, moses, zeus, or the coffee god. I thought you just abandoned the story completely (obviously not) please please please post asap to make me and your other readers REALLY happy. I ;give you cake! caring is creepy |
![]() ![]() ![]() if there is a God you will update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for making your time to write this story! ;D What do you mean about 'adding a new character.' And a HIM? It better not ruin Rayce and Blakes re-Laysh-mehnn-shipp-uhh! Er, relationship. Thank You, and stalk youu! Until you update, anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is amazing:) Geat Job Update soon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() im glad you havent left! ! keep on writing |