Reviews for Caffeine Concentration and Memory Combustion
Violent.Delights chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Like everyone else, I love the imagery and the title. The coffee thing works really well.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
I like this a lot.. the title is awesome and the whole coffee thing is awesome.. great piece
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Very strong images and like the style but the word and feels like it's repeated a bit too much. Interesting subject though, love the take on it you have its very unique. Really enjoyed this well done.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
wow i love the title and the imagery in this poem is stunning. keep on going!
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 5/8/2006

hah, great ending to this. the &'s were a little distracting though.

funny how we both made our accounts on the same day

a lonely september chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
this was so full of hope and pain and... it was just great. you did a great job with it.
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
whew. i loved it a whole bunch!
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
i adore it! i really and truely do. absolutely perfect. i love it!