I know this was intentionally bad, and it did make me laugh a few times, but god. This story made me feel like I'd been arse raped. You may be thinking one of two things; 1) Don't you think that's a tad over dramatic or 2) and you know what it feels like to be arse raped why?

To this i can only say, it's in my nature and I don't but i imagine it would feel a bit like that.

And if by no miracle you were not thinking either of those 2 things then my telepathic abilties require some tuning don't they

Dee

xoxo

Its official, you are my hero, i move for clar-the-pirates elevation to God-hood! (im sorry im so not a stalker i just have a free afternoon and got hooked on your stuff)hahahahahaha, thats the best Mills and Boon ive ever read! (and depressingly ive read quite a few!)yay

Hey there, Outlaw-2 here,

From the look of it, the characters are well developed, but in terms of visual, it's rather vague, though hints and small features did make up the characters' appearance. Story wise is a bordering between bland and exciting. It had its moments where I was pulled into the story, but not much. However, grammar wise, top notch.

Sincerely,

Outlaw-2

Haha that was silly! You will be honored and impressed to know that at every line, I said OUT LOUD "dum dum dum!" My family looked at me oddly, but I'm used to that so it's okay. This was entertaining. I read a book like this once when I was like 10. It's funny when you know it's ridiculous. It's when the author is serious about it that it's just sad. lol.