Reviews for trampoline, ego, questions
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
i liked these quite lots, mate. excellent work.
beitnot-perfect chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
"all I want is some minor justification

of this metaphorical struggle

things start out so simple

but simple can't exist here"- my favorite part.

These are all very good.