Hey its such an amazin chapter... I love this chapter... :) :)

I really liked your story unlike other stories i didnt think it was rushed in fact this may be my favorite supernatural story but they always include mate soulmates claiming and etc. but i like yours a lot it may use the same ideas but it was still different so thumbs up to you and it may have seemed like a rushed ending but it isnt really because of your intent to write a sequel i cant wait to read. Great story. :)

I think I'm a little late on this review, but I gotta say, that was awesome. I was completely involved in the story, eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Then I reached the end. Ah, my broken heart, lol. Anyway, this was the greatest exploration of Eastern dragons I've read yet. (They are majestic aren't they? I've been playing Skyrim for so long, the dragons just don't have the same appeal) And their love makes me wish stuff likes was actually real. Ah well, it's called fantasy for a reason ;)

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE. I absolutely adore this story and cannot express how glued to the computer I have become because of this story. The interaction between Sarea and Tentei is just too adorable, and you could have taken this story and kept running with it, but I think you stopped it at a perfect time. I'm actually a little surprised that Tentei did not outright kill Telemnar. It would have left Cameron king and who wouldn't want a good friend in a king?

Loved this story and concept!

could somebody explain to me, why is this story not a movie or something of that sort? This is really good!

As cliche as this story was I loved it lol. And I think I like the nakamura sun pairing even more than the tentei/Sarea pair. Can we expect "soulmates" anytime soon?

Hi, just wanted to say that i loved your story. it is incredibly well written and the characters are great. :) i read this quite a while ago and have been checking back once in a while to see if u've posted anything new. Unfortunately i havent seen any sequels. Have u stopped writing or changed account or smth?

Hey! So Im just starting this story and I really like the premise and the writing is quite good as well. However, there is one thing REALLY bugging me. You said Sarea had another year-Ish for her medicine degree. Ummmmm no. She's 23. Unless she is a prodigy and graduated high school at 14 she can't possible be almost done a PhD. Let's assume (and I'm going you the best possible circumstance) she graduated at 17. A pre-med undergrad takes four years - shed be 21. A medicine PhD would be four years on topic that (at least) making her 25. And she would have to do a residency for AT LEAST a year. So, the youngest age Sarea could possibly be is 26. Although Older would be more realistic.

Not wanting to insult, just stating facts. Otherwise I like the story.

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE THE BLOODY SEQUEL ALREADY! I wanna read this story again but i cant because i know ill get psyched on Nakamura and his litte mate but i wont be able to find out what happened to them because THERE IS NO SEQUEL AFTER SOOOOOOOOO MAAAAANY YEARS! It'll make me depressed.

WRITE THE DAMN SEQUEL ALREADY! THATS AN ORDER FROM A FAN WHO HAD FOLLOWED YOU FOR PRATIALLY SIX BLOODY YEARS!

So I just discovered this story today and I'm so in love with it. Initially, I thought it would be like anime related stuff but you really blew me away. The story was really engaging! I would really love to read the sequel! Please post the sequel! I hope this message reaches you though, for all I know, you may not even be using the same email address anymore.
By the way, I'm Singaporean too!

I absolutely loved this story! Your writing style is so great! It reminds me of the style of Brent Weeks in his Night Angel trilogy. I know it has been years since you finished this story, but I would still LOVE to read a sequel. Hopefully it will pop up sometime soon. In the meantime, I just want to congratulate you on a fabulous story that was so creative. While more things could have been addressed, such as her past, I still greatly enjoyed reading it. I would have liked for Sarea and Tentei to have a conversation about her past of being an orphan or something of the like. I believe you briefly mentioned that I'm the beginning. Regardless, I hope to see more of your work coming out soon!

Oh, look up there is it a bird? a plane? no its pigs in aerospace!
Teehee!

I laughed my through this one. I enjoyed the pairs and how they have tried to sort out their problems. Nakamura's caught like a fish on the line and still does not realize it. Sn is deluding herself and will probably get a clue in no more that two chapters; in my assessment. You did a good job in the plot. Some errors remain though. Write On!

I love this all!

Great work