Reviews for Koibito no Ryu
Raina chapter 23 . 12/2/2011
huh? cliche much? tentei's bestfrnd and sarea's bestfrnd! :D

i like it~

btw, when r u gonna make pigs fall frm the sky? ;D naka-poo and sun are gonna end up together right?
Rosedreamer101 chapter 31 . 11/19/2011
Awww...i absolutely love love this 3 the legend of the dragon and phoenix. how cute ! chinese stuft. makes me want to go watch a chinese drama. have you seen dragon love? it's a hong kong drama. this story reminds me of it. except this story's much better :D XD
JMBInuYasha chapter 31 . 11/16/2011
Great story! I remember the first time I read your story, and 5 years later it just as marvelous now as it was then.
Identification Please chapter 31 . 11/11/2011
let me just say, I absolutely love your story. It is so well written and everything flowed really well. I also liked your mythological world you made. To be honest,I prefer the Eastern Dragons as well. I look forward to your sequels!

P.S. I didnt comment on all of your chapters because I thought it might be slightly annoying.
purple-wolf-howl chapter 13 . 11/5/2011
LOL! Sarea's reaction to Tien's harem cracks me up everytime. I can just picture her face and her screech as she yells as him. Lol, poor Tien.
Ninavs chapter 31 . 10/30/2011
WHAT? That's it? Nooooooo...como back! We need an epilogue! PLEASE! I need some Sun and Nakamura loving...
Untainted chapter 31 . 10/22/2011
You should write one on Sun and Nakamura! Love them, favorite couple! SUN AND NAKAMURA, SUN AND NAKAMURA, SUN AND NAKAMURA!
xxXNightsareDaysXxx chapter 31 . 10/4/2011
It needs an epilouge yeah D: Otherwise awesome story
Sword of Darkness chapter 31 . 9/25/2011
This story is absolutely lovely, and I re-read it very often. I do agree with other reviewers and think that if you chose to pursue it, you'd have a really good story with Sun and Nakamura. Well done!
Miss. Rechelle chapter 31 . 9/21/2011

That's the end? I don't like it one bit. Not at all. There should be an epilogue, something more. It's such an abrupt end. I suppose when you wrote this, you were planning on posting a sequel, but that's no excuse for a crappy ending. In my opinion, the most important part of a story is the middle and the ending. The beginnings are always interesting. But when the novelty of the story wears off, and things in the plot settle in to a sort of "normal" state (in this case, the time where sarea and tentai go back to the real world),my interest tends to wear off. Any author who can keep me interested in a story without breaking off is AWE-FREAKING-SOME. I'll admit this story did not do it, and the ending is important because of the need, for all readers, for CLOSURE. The ending you've written disappoints me so bad...But don't get me wrong, I'd still like to say that I'd never ever be able to write anything as awesome as this. You're style is very detailed and pretty, it's got humour as well as kick-ass lemons (which is alwyas a plus). I suppose you may not ever read this review, but I still left it, because I hardly ever review of stories (grins apologetically), and I know ALL authors love them...So with that, I'm off to find another good read, please come back to fictionpress and fanfiction sometime soon, I'll be sure to read anything you publish. :) luff and huggles, Rechelle.
Miss. Rechelle chapter 17 . 9/20/2011
Holy shit... first lemon... my ass...
Miss. Rechelle chapter 14 . 9/20/2011
Now That! THAT is a CHARACTER! OMG,Naka-poo KICKS ASS!I'm really really sorry, but after reading that I HAVE to get to the next chapter, hence this review is itty bitty and short :P D
Miss. Rechelle chapter 7 . 9/20/2011

I started reading this aaages back, but the first few chapters didn't interest me at all :( It got loads better, but I find that there are a LOT of typos and such in it. Honestly, they GET ON MY NERVES. But don't get me wrong. You're an awesome writer, and I'd NEVER be able to write something even a quarter as good as this. I think the attraction between tentei and sarea is explosive and hot :) xD . Also, I've been itching for some ItaSaku lately, and Sarea and Tentei fit the bill quite well. I've read most of your fanfiction and I absolutely LOVE the way you portray Sakura-chan ! D .
MarshmallowRabbitt chapter 31 . 9/19/2011
This is such a fantastic tale. Very vivid and very well written. That said, do you ever actually plan on doing a sequel? I'd really, really love to read it because your characters are so engaging and I really do think Sun and Nakamura deserve their own tale.
Pumpkin.-.-.Kween chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
This story is all kinds of awesome. Your descriptions of the other world and other people/creatures were so vivid, it was easy to picture it. Thanks for sharing. I'm surprised you haven't written others, you are very talented. Thank you for entertaining me.
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