Reviews for Koibito no Ryu |
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![]() ![]() ![]() In the immortal words of Sarea, "AH! My virgin eyes!" Nonetheless, this was an incredible chapter. Very enthralling, and a little frightening at how well you depicted them. I saw them, and promptly turned red in a manner that even Sarea would be proud of. I know this story is complete, but you MUST keep writing. Maybe a sequel ;D Ah well, I know the answer would probably be no. But perhaps another story to corrupt and capture my poor, inexperienced mind? Haha, I kid. Nothing about this story is corrupted. It's beautiful, and I'm sad that this story has to end. Why can't they go on forever? Sugoi (not sure if that's how you spell it in English, but it stil means "amazing") |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I have read this story so many times! I can't wait for the sequel Soulmates. I am just wondering when it will be posted. I hope you still check your FP account! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like this must sound like the same old same old but I loved this story! Even though it's been literally years since you last updated your fp is there any chance soulmates will ever be put up? I would love to read it! |
![]() ![]() Hey! How's your story soulmates going? I for one can't wait for it after reading koibito no ryu which was AWESOME! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear paw-bells! I have been reading this story for a couple of years now, and I must say, that a couple of times a year, I just have to read this! This is so good ;) However, every time I'm left with this feeling that I just have to find out more about Sun and Nakamura! I would really love to read their story! So would you please consider writing a sequel? Pretty please? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um... your Japanese in the title is grammatically incorrect. It should be Ryuu no Koibito (龍の恋人), assuming you're trying to say "dragon lover" or "The dragon's lover" what you're actually saying ATM with your current title is "The Lover's Dragon" or "My lover's dragon" with the "watashi no" implied at the beginning. I haven't read your story, and the title is really putting me off. I hope you can fix that, because I'm a complete grammar nazi when it comes to Japanese and Hindi, And especially so with the entire Anime/Manga craze going around, and ignorance at it's peak. |
![]() ![]() Hum... In the beginning of the chapter you talk about her friends... But she doesn't have one, does she? There was the all thing about missing companionship, having nothing but her dreams, being a loner by choice more than an outcast no? Or maybe I misunderstood... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a nice story to read. I enjoyed the creativity. Good job! Jaliy!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() *applauds. Very well written fic. & good gosh, is that dragon impatient. LOL. This is one of my favourite stories ;P I'm actually quite glad that you decided to go and write about eastern dragons :) they're really underappreciated..and it's very refreshing to read about them. I absolutely love those two togethr :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story! It got a little confusing with the names every once in a while with eg. the Telemnar (I had thought it was the Elven King's name and not a place, but it doesn't make sense if that's the case). Other than that I really enjoyed reading this! I hope that you are able to write a sequel about Sun and Nakamura. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still loving this story. You've made me literally laugh out loud a few times already and there's still quite a bit of story left to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this story so far. I don't often see too many stories about dragons. Hopefully it will just continue to get better from here on out. I see loads of potential in this story, especially all the colorful characters :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey so, not that this really matters because most ppl don't know it anyway an in english it generally implies something that isn't true, mythos actually really just means story. Mythos can be used to describe a detailed history as well as a ledgend. like i said, most ppl don't know that, and we use it more to describe a fable or something. so it doesnt matter... just thought u'd like to know. o. and good story... i noticed that ur getting better not switching from past to present anymore and i'm guessing thats ur beta readers? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Done! Well, that certainly was fantastic! I freaking loved this story. Man, this thing took hours to read! I mean these are some ungodly hours I was reading this at. But it was so worth it! You are truly an amazing author. I do hope you keep writing, because I think you have some real talent. Thank you for the excellent read! And I wish you well on your writing journey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I'm reading this while listening to random music. I start singing along and realize that I'm saying "Think of instead a girl worth fighting for!" I found it funny how appropriate it was for this moment in the story. I don't know, maybe it's just me... Anyways, great story! I'm really enjoying this! |