Reviews for Koibito no Ryu |
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![]() ![]() I like your story. Its got a light comedy to it that works. I like Sarea too. Some characters can be just whiny, but you capture her youthful eagerness along with her inner strength. Tentei is also an interesting character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! I read in your AN that you are writing a squeal with the best friends, I can't wait for it! |
![]() ![]() I can't believe you didn't do as sequel, that's so disappointing! Such a good story! I loves Cameron but I felt like I have no closure with him and the feud :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been rereading this story for God knows how many times and I never get sick of it. Well, just at some parts, but for the most part I am completely in LOVE with this! It has been one of my favourite ones to read and I really hope you write the sequels! i have been DYING to know what is going to happen to Sun and Nakamura! I just hope wverythinng is going well for you and you may have time to write :) With Love, Black Ravenz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I have been reading everyday, all day (between other duties and things) on fictionpress and fanfiction and after a while you get bored of the boy meets girl, fall in love, bad thing happens, happily ever after. I loved that this story wasn't all doom and gloom, I'm glad that she wasn't overly and constantly ignorant, obnoxious and naive. Those things annoy the living daylight out of me, any sane and logical person would or shouldn't act that way, it shows a lack of substance, (I mean a little is fine, but there are some stories where it just gets irritating) what I loved about your story was that it was different, it had so much substance and so much life, it was written extremely well, in the last few chapters there were slight grammar inconsistencies, but that's normal for writing a long story. I enjoyed it so much. thank you for the wonderful read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was definetly one of my favourite reads. I really hope you get around to posting a squel. Thanks again for a great story. Gold star. |
![]() ![]() ![]() best story i have ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just have to say that sarea is the perfect heroine i have ever wanted in my own stories! and love reading about! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! does that mean that sun's nakamura's mate then?! is there going to be more of sun's character in the future!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wonder if that last part there is the elven king of that seer dude? |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was quite good for being your first time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so what IS high prince telemnar's plan? |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! the interaction between them is just so funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh! they are in trouble! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is totally within my range of fav. genres. I love it! :) |