I want to say that i am sorry, but i don't really understand what i am sorry for! To me this seems a sad poem, filled with promises that might be unwanted. As a whole i love the poem it is coming from the heart!

basically describes what happened to me this winter, and what's kinda happening again...i'm tired of it. great poem, deff brings up emotions in me.. well done, keep it up :)

Tragically elegant. Great job writing the feelings and actions felt and played out. Enjoyed the poem, but pitty the poems subject for suffering so. Excellently written. Good job... but trully tragic.

it made me quiver.. great job. "and i'll fall for it/ every time".. so true *sigh*

A very intriguing poem, with hints of tenderness strewn about with horrible thoughts. Great, but sad, ending. well done