Reviews for Intentions
all for one chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
I want to say that i am sorry, but i don't really understand what i am sorry for! To me this seems a sad poem, filled with promises that might be unwanted. As a whole i love the poem it is coming from the heart!
forgottenxxfreak chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
basically describes what happened to me this winter, and what's kinda happening again...i'm tired of it. great poem, deff brings up emotions in me.. well done, keep it up :)
Unknown Eden chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
Tragically elegant. Great job writing the feelings and actions felt and played out. Enjoyed the poem, but pitty the poems subject for suffering so. Excellently written. Good job... but trully tragic.
Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
it made me quiver.. great job. "and i'll fall for it/ every time".. so true *sigh*
Predak chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
A very intriguing poem, with hints of tenderness strewn about with horrible thoughts. Great, but sad, ending. well done