Reviews for back seat
Rashaka chapter 1 . 7/14/2001
That was strangely beautiful. It was an interesting and fascinating way to peak into real life and the way relationships change, and people grow. It kind of went full circle, ne?
ACM a.k.a. Annie May chapter 1 . 6/30/2001
I had to read this when I read the summary, but it turned out to be great! It isd very comforting.
Ragdoll chapter 1 . 6/11/2001
This is a pretty strange idea but really original! It creates a warm mental image (if that makes sense!)
BabyGurl chapter 1 . 5/24/2001
That was soooooooo good! You have some talent you know that?
Kalli13 chapter 1 . 5/20/2001
Very nice use of repeating form, though I would play around with the tempo a bit; try to make it flow more smoothly. Very poetically (_;;) powerful, I took it as more of a metaphor then anything else... *shrugs* I like it. What else is there to say?
Spindel chapter 1 . 2/25/2001
Hey I like it! ITs a good poem! (And I wanted to say thanxs for reviewing my poems so many times..)