|Reviews for and it won't let me|
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
oh WOW! Love the last two lines. acctually the whole thing is beautiful. Its really nicely written as well. Nice work! Awesome.
| lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
love it. very interesting, every line is clever. good work.
| Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
i like it a lot. Good job. Romanticly nice.
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
| she wants revenge chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
thankyou so much for reviewing my poetry. it led me to yours! i like this piece, the emotions behind it. you're an exceptional poet..
| insomnia in dreamland chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
i loved the bitterness and sadness to it. it gave me chills. just lovely
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
I loved the conclusion, and the subtle rhyme. It does seem like as writers our poetry is like diary entries.