This is so fucking beautiful.

I really love this story. i hope you write more soon

Sorry, I've been meaning to read this for some time, but it keeps sliping just out of my grasp, time that is, like a fish. The character developement in these chapters is wonderful and I like the different persectives, very subtle, on their relationship.

I really have to applaud you, sex that is not smut. As easy as that should seem it is a rare occurrence on then site and most like it in general. Mainly due to the majority of the prepubescent authors sitting around trying to sound grown up by slipping harlequin-esque affairs that always seem to include some rendition of “their bodies called out to each other to become whole in the other's hot, throbbing embrace once again.” Really, I have to thank you for this breath of fresh air in all that rubbish. I also like the character development that is happening in this chapter.

Simply touching. I like it so far and would like to see more since it could really go anywhere. I love the non-sequential flow of the chapters, not sure why but I do.

Ok, so this is really good, but Im really confused. I guess more of this will make sense as it progresses, and the change of points of view, too, but I really do love it.

i liked it too

the last line... gahh wonderful

I absolutely love this, and I've no idea why. It is insanely well written.

Good job!