|Reviews for Wishes In Shallow Beauty|
| Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
The last five lines were so beautiful! I'm glad someone else sees the beauty of people, whether they're old or young.
| Knocturne chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
nice! i relate(although im still in the twilight of my youth)
| GirlNamedLiv chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
good moral ending but i think the last sentence was a bit too long for the flow