love it, even though its so simple and short- it holds so much. i love the ending line, really great piece.

i read this like, 5 times, and each time i get different implications. so i have no clue what to say aobut this, but i like it.

Interesting format, mind if i ask about the title? - Arcane Devices

I like this. The rhyming isn't too much, but just right.