Reviews for The Beast Within
Animalistair chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
I have to say... I didn't think that anything that could inspire Harry Potter Fan Fiction could be so cool. You've proved me wrong... and I love it. I assume that the italics are the wolf talking? Good work
Aramar the Black chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Very nice. I'm a sucker for this stuff. It's original to , to add suggestions, I lose my rythmn at lines 7 and 8. Maybe it's just me.
lordelfy chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
i have a werewolf poem also, but ours are completely different which rocks. Great job i liked this
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
that's lovily... you know what I mean. I don't know what else to say.
Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
I love the whole animalistic feeling it expressed. The way this poem gets your mind racing like it's your heart. Your palms glistening with sweat. I really like the stances it portrays.
LilMournbid chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Awesome poem! I got some inspiration from it and it makes me want to write another poem after so long! I just love poems like this! Great job!
Patricia Louise chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
This was great, as I already know. The fanfic is great too!
Former Kimmi Gray chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
I LOVE IT! Great job!