|Reviews for Had a Great Fall|
| wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
"All the king’s horses and all the king’s men cannot put her back together again. For even they can see that all the magic is gone. She’s really not amazing at all, they say, And looking at her now, I realize she never really was."
I like this bit, though the whole thing is rather good.
| AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
You really have a good style and present a good bit of imagery, but mixing the fantasy and realistic lines makes it feel conflicted. The whole "pressure" concept is good, but it seems like you're taking it a little too literally. Good job, overall, though.
| Uhala chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Surprisingly, I know the feeling...
I really like the style. Your voice shows through.