Reviews for More Than Just a Grain of Salt
zhi blaq chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
these are the kinds of things i think about...but at the same time i didn't really think about it.

heheh lol!

this is nice -not the lies
Arafax chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
"Well, we all have our favorite little lies, now, don’t we?"


That was good line right there. This is so true. It's a pity that it is though, I have to say. *sighs* But we all have a dark side do we not? Some are just more heart wrenching than others.

Great job.
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Ooh, the satire in this is bitter, palpable. The "Shoot for the moon..." line made me laugh. Good words, great writing.
wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Oh, stunning.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
that just about sums up every highschool oxymoron. nice job.
Aella88 chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Short and powerful. I've heard most of those sayings...but never really thought about the iron behind them all. But, I must say you have a point...
hey maria chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
“If you try hard enough, you can accomplish anything you set your mind to,” says the parent, who badly wants to make it true for you.

The bit about wanting to make it was very heart-breaking.
Uhala chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
LOL true!

Did you come up with these on your own?
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Very nice... like how many people can relate to the feeling. How everyone tells/ feeds you small lies, feeling as if they think they've 'influenced' you.

Well written!