Reviews for Dear Mom and Dad
99AcountsAreBest chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
good poetry here... sometimes it's abab and sometimes it's aaa or whatever! love it! and i love the plot line, when he tries to convince himself not to kill them but he has to.
a reader chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Hey this is nice. But it feels likeprose, a little, cos if it were all in a paragraph it would be normal. Its cool, yeah, but it scares me. Seriously.
KristyASoroka chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
I loved the flow to this one. Nicely done.
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
This is so beautifully written. There's a lot of anger and vengence in this poem, and the rhythm is great. I really like the flow of the poem. Great job. Keep writing! *adds story to favs*
tinkabel chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
i really like it well done