| Reviews for Come With Your Arms Raised |
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   Annatari chapter 4 . 6/7/2006 Lovely new chapter. What is up with Jiri? He's being all weird. Hm. Whatever it is, it can't be good. Anyway, great chapter, keep up the good work! |
| Anya Tempest chapter 4 . 6/7/2006 I really like this, and I'm quite surprised by it, to be honest, as I would never have thought this would be my type of story. I think it's your characterisation - all your characters are really vibrant and pop out the story like they're real. For me, a story all depends on the characters - if they're flat, I can't read it, but if they work, then I'll be glued to it, and your characters are awesome. I love the main character's inner dialogue - her tangeants are beautifully poetic. I usually dislike a lot of description of characters, it often comes across as ameteurish and over-the-top, but I really liked all your details here. It must be because you handled it really well; it had an edge of poetry to it all, rather than: "he had blue jeans and red hair and a yellow T-Shirt and black shoes with blue stipes." So, yes, I really liked it. I'll add you to my author alert, so I know when you update. I'll stop gushing over you now. D |
| Newspeak chapter 4 . 6/7/2006 How humourus. How do you know so much about child psychology? |
| MiidKniight chapter 3 . 6/1/2006 This story is great. Though a little weird. No problem with that though. I wonder how they can be so close and both not act on it. Someone seems jealous. |
| Newspeak chapter 3 . 5/30/2006 The overall plot is still such a mystery...and yet the story keeps my attention. That's talent. (I forogt to comment on the last chapter that no one NYC would give that outfit a 2 look, well, besides the tourists. I say this from personal experince.) |
| holla chapter 2 . 5/29/2006 great story keep up the good work |
| Jayn chapter 3 . 5/29/2006 Cool. _ Yeah, i'm back. Just lost the story for awhile. Please update! |
| Annatari chapter 3 . 5/28/2006 I rather like this story. The characters are pretty great, especially Miguel. He's so mysterious. I also really like the details you add to everything. When you described Miguel I could actually see his eyes, it was great. Anyway, great story. Keep up the good work! |
| Amandine Daumier chapter 3 . 5/28/2006 Another good chapter. I love Vay! She's real and quirky and it makes her so loveable! Keep up the good writing. :) |
| Amandine Daumier chapter 2 . 5/25/2006 I absolutely love this story! it's so origional. I can't wait for more. :) |
| SapphireIris chapter 2 . 5/23/2006 The curiosity is killing me! you can't just leave me hanging like this, can you? No more reviews for you until you update! -SapphireIris |
| Newspeak chapter 2 . 5/23/2006 Nice rambling thoughts. I couldn't write that long about nothing. and YAY! of telemarketers! |
| Newspeak chapter 1 . 5/10/2006 Excellent peice. The detial of the charaters is amazing. Nice job introducing them. Crituque: Try to avoid quoting word for wrod from narration to dialouge (ex: I was staring with a goofy smile on my face until Jiri said, “You’re staring… with a goofy smile on your face.” ) (I personally own a pair if stippy tights and the school thinks I'm a freak for it.) |
| Jayn chapter 1 . 5/9/2006 I like faeries! they are cool. _ Cool story. Please update! |
| RoseofFlame chapter 1 . 5/6/2006 Wow, this is everything and more that a good story should be! Keeps the reader reading, wanting more. Painting pictures of what the characters look like and feeling what they feel. I REALLY love this one. I can't wait for the next chapter. D |