Reviews for Come With Your Arms Raised
Annatari chapter 4 . 6/7/2006
Lovely new chapter. What is up with Jiri? He's being all weird. Hm. Whatever it is, it can't be good. Anyway, great chapter, keep up the good work!
Anya Tempest chapter 4 . 6/7/2006
I really like this, and I'm quite surprised by it, to be honest, as I would never have thought this would be my type of story.

I think it's your characterisation - all your characters are really vibrant and pop out the story like they're real. For me, a story all depends on the characters - if they're flat, I can't read it, but if they work, then I'll be glued to it, and your characters are awesome.

I love the main character's inner dialogue - her tangeants are beautifully poetic.

I usually dislike a lot of description of characters, it often comes across as ameteurish and over-the-top, but I really liked all your details here. It must be because you handled it really well; it had an edge of poetry to it all, rather than: "he had blue jeans and red hair and a yellow T-Shirt and black shoes with blue stipes."

So, yes, I really liked it. I'll add you to my author alert, so I know when you update. I'll stop gushing over you now. D
Newspeak chapter 4 . 6/7/2006
How humourus.

How do you know so much about child psychology?
MiidKniight chapter 3 . 6/1/2006
This story is great. Though a little weird. No problem with that though. I wonder how they can be so close and both not act on it. Someone seems jealous.
Newspeak chapter 3 . 5/30/2006
The overall plot is still such a mystery...and yet the story keeps my attention. That's talent.

(I forogt to comment on the last chapter that no one NYC would give that outfit a 2 look, well, besides the tourists. I say this from personal experince.)
holla chapter 2 . 5/29/2006
great story keep up the good work
Jayn chapter 3 . 5/29/2006
Cool. _ Yeah, i'm back. Just lost the story for awhile. Please update!
Annatari chapter 3 . 5/28/2006
I rather like this story. The characters are pretty great, especially Miguel. He's so mysterious. I also really like the details you add to everything. When you described Miguel I could actually see his eyes, it was great. Anyway, great story. Keep up the good work!
Amandine Daumier chapter 3 . 5/28/2006
Another good chapter. I love Vay! She's real and quirky and it makes her so loveable! Keep up the good writing. :)
Amandine Daumier chapter 2 . 5/25/2006
I absolutely love this story! it's so origional. I can't wait for more. :)
SapphireIris chapter 2 . 5/23/2006
The curiosity is killing me! you can't just leave me hanging like this, can you? No more reviews for you until you update!

Newspeak chapter 2 . 5/23/2006
Nice rambling thoughts. I couldn't write that long about nothing. and YAY! of telemarketers!
Newspeak chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
Excellent peice. The detial of the charaters is amazing. Nice job introducing them.

Crituque: Try to avoid quoting word for wrod from narration to dialouge (ex: I was staring with a goofy smile on my face until Jiri said, “You’re staring… with a goofy smile on your face.” )

(I personally own a pair if stippy tights and the school thinks I'm a freak for it.)
Jayn chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
I like faeries! they are cool. _ Cool story. Please update!
RoseofFlame chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Wow, this is everything and more that a good story should be! Keeps the reader reading, wanting more. Painting pictures of what the characters look like and feeling what they feel. I REALLY love this one. I can't wait for the next chapter. D
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