Reviews for To be Old and Strong
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
These are nice. My favorite haiku is the second one, particularly the line “careen over blasted peaks,” simply because of the crystal clear imagery and vivid diction. The only problem I noticed was that you misspelled ‘shades’ in the third haiku. Other than that, these are flawless! Keep up the good work!