Reviews for To Fail
oldstories chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
the length of the poem is perfect...it descriptions are a bit vague but sincere. nice!

:)
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
The lastline is the most powerful,i think...Short and blunt. Ilike poem.
DELETE DELETE DELETE ACCOUNT chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
this is a good poem...its written really nicely and the way you italized, quoted, etc the phrases, really made it a whole lot better...nicely done... i have a poem kinda like it...its called Falling in Failure... i thought it was half decent till i read this...lol