|Reviews for Failing Love|
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
horray for rhyming
| Flore Verde chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
o, I like this a lot. Who cares if its short, I think this way it puts a little more emotion across to the reader! Nice...
| Love Eternally chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Oh damn, the ending is kinda sad. Kinda really sad. Starts out all happy and stuff and throws that bomb at us. You are very deceiving you know? It's a good poem though. I like the theme. Please keep up the amazing poetry.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Ah, that's sad :(
It's really good tho. Great work.
PS And thanks for reviewing :)
| identical2hate chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
this is really good(my favourite sofar)for a first attempt it hasan awesome flow sensation.
| Versalilies chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
This was your first attempt at a beat poem? You write like a pro! Good job can't wait to read more peoms by you
| bigtina59 chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
I love it. This is really good. You capture a lot of emotions about the ups and downs pf love. Great job!
| BoMbShELL chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
that...was...totally...fricken...sweet! I love it! that was amazing! and thanks for reviewing my stuff! and this is a really good first try at a beat poem! you really wouldn't know it was your first try if you didn't read the summary!~DM
| je suis une pomme du terre chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
omG! Your work is so amazing. The beat is perfect and the ending was great. What exactly does a "beat" poem consist of? I've never heard of that term before...Keep writing!~Midnight Star~
| autumn berrington chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
"But yet again, I’ve failed, you’ve died."
nice line. i think that you had a sort of childness to this poem...idk, maybe thats just me. its still a good poem tho.
| Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
That's really good for a first try... actually, it's just plain good, first try or not! D Maranwe
| eloquent nothingness chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
nice. short, sweet, sad; packs a punch. i like it
| Leaving Here chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
It ryhms(did i spell that rite?)! i have no idea how to write rhyming peoms, if i do, they turn out funny!well, good job, it was good!:)~Liz
| Let It Rain chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
I really liked the line "behind my mask I let them hide". Also, the rhyming worked well on this one. Keep up the good work!
| asteria24 chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Nice... so many different ideas captured in one poem!