Reviews for this is perfect
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Wow, this is one of your best pieces, I love this, the format, the words, everything, great work _
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
prettypretty angst. i heart the title. i still would like something to be done with the parenthesis that's more drastic. this way, it reads the same with them or without them. i think it's amazing when the formatting provides a completely different lens. just my outlook, though. good on you for capturing something raw in this poem.

kait
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Very emotive, you express yourself so well in this poem, the feelings are so plain anyone could read this and feel what you are feeling.

Keep it up.
having reached closure chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
ooh this is wonderful, i can really feel how you feel in here. are you ever going to tell that person what you wrote in here?

i like this a lot :)

-naomi

PS: i hope you feel better

PSS: wow there's a lot of 'feel's in this review
Midnight Doorman chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Interesting use of parentheticals, a unique literary style with that.

In response to the poem, I'll quote A Perfect Circle "What's your rush now? Everyone will have his day to die."