Reviews for Pure Brilliance
OneGirlAlone chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
And this is the part where we all go "Aw!"

Ready? Okay.

OctoberSkies chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
*adds to faves* i loved it but it was way to long for one chapter
King Patch chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Hey baby!

This piece is awesome. I didn't get it at first but it revealed itself really naturally. You give the reader a sense of solving a puzzle (it was really good for my ego!).

I loved this line: "What duct tape is to the fix-it man, parties are to people who are wondering and loving and breaking inside."

Absolutely awesome.
JMU chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
holy...snapping...crap. this reminds me of this story i was writing back in grade nine but never got around to finishing because of laziness! except it had nothing to do with muffins, but it was kinda in this style of writing. wow. now i feel like writing that story again...*sigh*
AbbeyEileen chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
/I want to write a novel, something really thought-provoking, but I can’t even finish short stories./

That is my favorite line from the story, because it is very true of me. I like Izzy and Marco, but I think you should edit in line breaks, because it is kind of hard to differentiate between their different parts- they're different, but at the same time, so alike.

I really like this story!