Absolutly LUV the story! Unfortunetly it looks to be dead, but if you can start it up again!

I love the names in this story. Estabrooks is a cool teacher and I totally know that game from drama 'cause I did the old couple on the park bench!

considering that Ester and Mark are older than you, the whole playing manhunt thing in highschool doesn't seem weird.

Anyway you better update this story 'cause it's too cute for words.

Keep on writing! It's really good and keeps me interested which is usually hard to do.

It's weird and i love that there's finally a girl main character who can defend herself. It's reall good.

I really like this beginning and am excited to read the rest of it. Nice names, very creative.

Hello,

I really enjoy this story. It has a great blend of humor and romance. You've also developed great characters. Looking forward to reading more!

Hey, found your story today, and was reading through when I saw your question at the end of Chapter 2 about it not keeping your line breaks. There's a few authors out there, like myself, that actually wait until they upload the chapter and put in the mark in the html format page to divide it up. I've also seen dividers such as

T-T-T-T-T-T-T

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

so on and so forth...hope it helps

Rock on! You updated! I had to do a double take when I saw that you updated! Don't worry though, I know how things can get busy and then when you throw writer's block in the mix...not good. And I'm the same way, with school and extra-curriculars, and family crap, I hardly ever have time to write. ...anyway!This story is so cool and I'm so glad she's not mad at Daemon anymore. I can't wait for an update.

Keep up the good work chica.

-Manda.

yes! shez back! deer neer neer neer...neer neer...neer neer neer neer neer (can't touch this) deer neer neer neer...neer neer...:D

YES! *pumps fist* more action!

LOVED how u went into all that detail about it. made it seem very realistic! :D

KISS HER AGAIN, U IDIOT! :D but whatz this...part...? *waves finger* don't keep secrets, daemon!

I'm dying here! What happens next! Oh God, Update! Please!

Awesome! I loved the contact thing, that was funny _

And now for more updates!

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I still like the story though. Can't wait to see what happens next. If I met Daemon, I'd be like woah and start poking him to see if he was real or not.

(Wow that was a freaking fast update! Kewl...)

Go after her Daemon! Jeez, lol - they're the coolest couple, I love it!

Oh my gosh, you've got to update. I loved reading the part wear she was fighting him before she won. It was just so well written and really sounded powerful the way you wrote it.

Update soon!

OMG KISS HER QUICK! B4 SHE DOES SOMETHING STUPID!

lol, yes he is VERY cute and fuzzy, mi little ball of fur. he is the LIGHT of my LIFE.

HAMBURGERS & BROCCOLI!

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