|Reviews for Sonnet 017|
| violent affectionist chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I don't know if you ever check this anymore. But my hope is that you do. I am reading each story, poem, and sonnet through glazed eyes. Eyes so glazed due to thoughts of missing you more than any poem could capture in words..all but yours, i think you could do it. You amaze me. All the time. You are my best friend. and i'm sorry that things turned out this way. Please write to me.
Yours Always, the loving face.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Wow, marvelous color and motion in this work. Remarkably vivid and picturesque. Wonderful use of the form. Great write.
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
I'm going to kill you and steal your talent. Jesus wow. Usually I'm not a big fan of nature poems, but this one took about a line to win me over. I love how you bring in the gods/goddesses, it makes it feel so old-fashioned & cool. And I actually got the bit about Apollo! Gorgeous. )
| hear me smile chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
beautiful, simply beautiful.
| checkerboxed chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Lighthearted and beautiful, with wonderful imagery (as always)... i love the phrase "they're blushing incandescent in the night" and "the endless petaled rainbow"... wonderful. Keep writing, dahling... haha -Rhia