Reviews for Enemy
polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
ooh, this is very good...the anger has really poured through. I like the image its created, of someone whos grabbed everything and now should just crawl back under their rock, and you as the soulless person.

Ur Lil' Chimpy chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Well, I know how you most certainly feel! I can also, say you won't be feeling the same way in a couple of weeks...cheer up monkey butt :)
simply meg chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Hmm... I feel the anger pouring out of this piece. I don't really think there are such things as enemies though... read my poem "Look At Yourself" and you'll understand what I mean. Nice Poem though! Write On!