Reviews for You Do Not Listen
HgBookworm chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Very nice poem. I did like the twist at the end... It added much originality to this piece. Good luck with your writing in the future. -HgBookworm
ColorfulHearts chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Wow! I almost thought it was someone who is hearbroken. I like how you choose your words.
Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
I think it's deeper than it appears to be.
SnoDragon chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
*laughs* I love it! Especially that line at the end. At first I thought it was going to be another of those over-the-top "I've lost my love and now I'm depressed"-type poems. How glad I was that it was something much better!

Well done.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
You were right about the ending. Very good job. Please read and review.