It was an interesting plot line, that *could* prove interesting if you had expanded it from a one shot into an actual story. The entire story, as you wrote it, went very quickly with almost no detail and exposition, which is necessary in even a short story.

Also, I don't really think Matt would have had sex with Jessica after knowing her for all of several minutes. It doesn't seem probable, but I suppose you are the author...

The ending definately did make me laugh, although I don't believe I was supposed to react that way...