|Reviews for As You SLeep|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Aw, sets a nice scene. Certainly nicer than some of the stuff I've been reading tonight (I'm talking content by that, lol). Keep writing! :)
| Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
is this is any way a kind of a religious poem?
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
So peaceful, sad and sweet. Reminds me of my friends and me. We like "people watching," like we'd sit on the steps of the stairs at a mall, and watch people walk by, and we'd comment and draw our own conclusions about them just by looking at what they're doing(a bit off topic). Ending was lovely, very smooth, and it's sort of like closing the door on him(her?)"The floor creaks and a breath is held" beautiful poem
| goinggone chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
i like the mood it sets. great work!