Wow. This poem is absolutely amazing. I love the way it flows and the feeling you put into it. You put a lot of thought into this, huh? It's beautiful, and so deep. I'm sure you did great for the class.

u have that rite...good job!

WOW. Intense poem. I give you props, I could never write anything so beautiful:]

-janene

whoa.

i love this. very deep. i need sometime to digest and dig into the poem. cool. it's a very fascinating perspective.

Interesting poem. I like it.

Really interesting poem, i liked it. Thanks again for reviewing my story

it flows together and I like that in a peom. Love it.

Thanks for the review hope you keep reviewig. hint hint lol

wow i really liked this poem, it felt mad deep. and while i was reading it, it felt rather flowy and dream like. i liked that.

i bet u got an a ]!

good job

Hey!

The words you choose are perfect. You really set the mood and paint your images effectively! Good job! I enjoyed reading this.

One note: that shape what I am, see, here, and feel. ('here' should be 'hear')

i love it! pleaz write more! _

thanx for the review

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if only life was that simple the quote in there rings quite true. good work

This was a very nice poem, not one that is found alot which makes it better, because it's genuine.

I hope though that you continue to write poems or anything in general.