|Reviews for Animal Nature|
| windowless room chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
Those were some brilliant poems.
It might have been my lack of patience, but the first ones seems better than the latter few. Might I suggest putting each poem as a chapter?
Sorry I can review each one individually: I thought that "The Moth" has very nice imagery, and that your poem about the cow had a cute, light-hearted title.
One thing to note-this line, in your birds poem: "Unfortunately, the world doesn't allows approve" I'm not sure if it's a mistake on your part or if it's just a cool way of using language that I don't know about, but I thought I'd point it out.
Overall, nice collection.