Reviews for If Only
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
But I never said anything, because I thought you would laugh, lie and say sorry, your mates don’t like me, why should you

You did

(I like this one, it makes me awe.)

I also like how you use "If Only"... it sure makes readers' heart clenched. WE feel for the narrator. Nice poem. _
Caught By Myself chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
This is the story of my life - high school life, that is. And it hasn't even gotten to the point of me talking to him.

The title caught my eye. Did you write this out of real-life experience? This is a good piece... I like the small, yet heavy questions right after the sentences. I like the effect they have on your writing.
the nonexistant chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
Wow, I really like this! Not bad.
Pokey831 chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Wow. Great stuff. I can totally relate to it. Things like this are hard, and you put it into words really well. Keep it up!.

P.S. I should have the next chapter of my story up soon!
bright-silver-star chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
omg that is so good and so true
x-kit-x chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Very nice poem, i wish i was half as good as you at writing poetry. Is it about you? or anybody else in particular?
Passage chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Wow...and so true too