This is definitely one of the more creative and well written stories on this site. Thank you for writing it.

Aww that's really sad... :(

Wow, what a subject. It's intristically frightening... for some reason, the society reminds me a bit of Farenheit 451. I really enjoyed it, though, I was able to imagine the scenes, on a set... my only slightly negative comment is that it's a bit short, but this is coming from someone immersed in details. Wonderful job!

This is very good.

I like how you convey the father's bitterness, the mother's distrust, and the "daughter's" naïveté.

Wow... this is just amazing. Chilling. It's a beautiful, well-written piece.

Oh I love that!

It's kind of like Uglies, by Scott Westerfield. I love the whole concept, and you did it very well.

I rarely read plays but I must say this is one of the best written and heart wrenching ones I have ever seen.

Sometimes I found it confusing with the italics being the stage directions and the tone of voice, but other than that it was a perfect read.

It does make you realise things that you would never think of unless presented with the situation. I'll avidly read your other, and future, work for more of this excellent style.