Reviews for The Gilded Bead
angeloftheninthorder chapter 2 . 5/16/2006
I've read the second chapter, or well first, and I love it just as much as I did the prolouge. My first one was about the prolouge, this one is to tell you how much I love the second chapter. I truly want to read more as your imagery and suspense are delightful. Where did you come up with this idea?
Ballerina with a Gun chapter 2 . 5/10/2006
Cool...I like your originality. This looks like a VERY interesting plot.

Try adding some more flowery description, though. It makes for a more realistic mood and setting.

Great job so far-hope to see you continue it!
April Hammer chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Whoa! I'm VERY interested to read this! This sounds like a great story! I'm definitely putting this on my favs. You've got yourself a reader, buddeh! Nice job! . I'm dying to read more!
angeloftheninthorder chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
I love where you are going with this. I want to find out more, for your writing is very intriguing.