Reviews for Concentricity
Jezsh chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
I like the contrast between the sentences in bold and the whole poem. It's interesting, puzzling though! I wouldn't say this flows as well as some of your other pieces, but it has some lovely images in it and some really great word choices.
Christy chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
i dont get it. Its fab, and all, but I DONT GET IT.*bangs head with keyboard*This is proof you are a better poet than me. I'm holding you to that. AND WHAT DID YOU MEAN WHEN YOU SAID "find better morals for friend"?They didnt steal the money iz. People gave it to them. All will be explained son.
Iris Early chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
you is a genius darling.
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
oh, this is wonderful. i love the doublemeaning , very very well .
poppy nowis chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
good experiment! the format really works, v clever. i love hidden meanings, well it's not that hidden i guess, bt you know what i mean. anyway, really goodx