love the story i am wiccan to Blessed Be )O(

I admire this story. I can't wait unitl you update next!

~Hisa

Awesome chapter you have here

waterhealer

It does seem similar to that, doesn't it...

I hope you will go off on a completely interesting and origanal tangent soon. Update!

There were a few errors in here, grammatical and otherwise, and the beginning of this chapter, where she was in her room, confused me. I couldn't quite tell what you ment.

I find this funny, they are Wiccan, but go to a Christian school? Have you been reading Power of Three?

Anyway, it wasn't as good as the first chapter... and I can only hope you'll get better.

Blessed Be, Lupine_Eyes

A beautiful circle, to be sure, your mastery of words something to behold.

It was a lovely beginning to the story, and I am looking forward to reading the remaining chapters.

hey! you updated! I can't wait what happens next!

waterhealer

Well, this is interesting. I am a solitary Wiccan and I've never been able to write fiction directly about my religion. Wicca plays second fiddle or works as a side plot in a lot of my work but it's never front and center. I admire that you can do this. I'll certainly be tuning in for future chapters.

Blessed Be,

~Rain Gray

I like this story,I myself am a wiccan so I know a bit about magick. this story is more on the fantasy side of wicca though, but its really well written, reminds me of W.I.T.C.H a bit, but yours explains alot more, i love it please continue:)

~Saleinaenachiya

i think its good so far. keep up the good work!

Cool, it has Wiccan in it, I want to be a wiccan, anyway great work with your story, but it totally sounds like W.i.t.c.h., (sorry just had to say it _) Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting what your imagation can come up with in the next chapter.

waterhealer