Reviews for Invisible Girl
flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Hey, you stole the title of one of my poems. And a thousand other peoples'... Lol. No, I liked this. It's better than mine. (I could try to defend myself by saying I was only in fifth grade when I wrote it, but I don't think my poetry's gotten that much better... Lol.) No one likes a writer... My teachers always liked me. Or they atleast acted like it. Lol. One of them bought me a book to write poetry in... She's so awesome, I think. I didn't even know what poetry was until I had her for a teacher. (That was like third grade... I was pretty dumb.) Anyway... My favorite two lines are She's so nice, she's so sweet Always hoping to become complete. I know there's gotta be some kind of word for what that's called, the two lines, but I totally don't remember. Stupid me. Lol. Well...Good work, good bye. I'm being a burden. Lol.
puppyrock3 chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
wow, That sounds amazingly like you nicki! it kind-of sounds like me too, with less death wishing...