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| Dawn Gabriel chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
O! I really like this. But I say that about all your poems... oh well. This is a very assertive peice. I like the last line-"Indeed..." Keep writing!~TM
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
sad but relatable.
| justaghost chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Very interesting. Good piece.