Totally understand the previous review. But hey, I wrote this six years ago-before emo even existed. The only reason I'm probably not going to change it is because it is an older poem of mine-it serves as a reminder of poetical growth.

ok...i didn't like the last line, "and it is over." it's so over used and makes the poem seem poseur-emo-ish. Just work on the last line and it will make it infinitely better.