Reviews for Calaelin
AluminumMuse chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Quite interesting. I really like it. The dialog at the beginning is a bit confusing, though.
Goddess Aurora chapter 2 . 11/16/2006
I like your desciption of places and enviornment. Very detail and very descriptive. I can imagine the scene in my mind.

Wow, cliffhanger already. Keep up the good work!
Goddess Aurora chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
Pretty interesting so far.

But I don't think it's very useful to put info on the Seven Divisions in the beginning, because we know nothing about them yet. The readers would forget it or didn't even pay attention to it. You should interest the readers, and gradually provide them with information. Well, just a suggestion. Otherwise, interesting stuff.
Taylary Daisuke chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Let me get this straight. SInce this the middle of the story, we won't be able to know who the fortune teller was until we read what happenned earlier. Great!

Damacles really did mess-up. What an idiot.

Nice Fic! Till later!
andfound815 chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
Nice, but there's no need to put (THIS IS DURING THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY.) We're supposed to figure that out as we go along.

Good job, though.

_R&R my novel EARTHSTONES, please!
Twin Fire Dragons chapter 2 . 5/17/2006
Owie...that had to hurt...well interesting story it's good. I'll come back and read it again when it's updated bye bye for now.