|Reviews for Stumble as you dance with death|
| t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
I love this one too, the imagery and the style is just heartbreakingly amazing.
| onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
E... kinda hard to follow.. eyes wanna continue down... but then there's the side lines... such space between them? Me not know. But I do love the poem!
"...leather trust"... XDD Rofl! You crack me up!
| Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
yeah . . . i like potatoes . . .kidding. no really, i do. and i like this poem too. you already read it to me and i already told u i liked the first two lines. i like the 2 stanzas that start with "wish" and "dance". they are vivid and colorful, but sad and lonely too. and yet i like! and there for with shall have been ur review my love! X3
| Anecdotes Of The Arcane chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
"let depression be your masterpiece"
THAT line inspires me for some reason. It reminds me of a friend of mine, but yeah - amazing poem, the imagery is scary, like a horror movie. Darn it, loved every line!