Reviews for Who woulda guessed
Adrian StClaire chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
heyy.

its pretty good, i like the content. i mean, it could certainly be developed into a really good story, if you know what i mean. there are a alot of errors in it [ie. "thias" is spelled "thighs" and "arvide" should be "arrived".] i think if you took time to read over it before posting it, that would help alot.

and more details. i mean, its good. but it has to be believable even if it is fantasy, and details help there.

good luck, update soon.