|Reviews for Catch Up|
| it's not your fault chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
the ending is absolutely perfect. "i want you to wait for me to catch up" - it's one of those lines that float around and find their way onto a billion different things. (books, profiles, etc.) it really catches someone.
| Shades Of Autumn chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Poems are very good ways of expressing emotions and getting rid of nagging fears. If you want my honest opinion, this isn't much of a poem (sorry!) but if it's made you feel better, then I take it to have fullfilled its ultimate purpose. One thing, though, that you could alter easily (if you did so wish) would be to get rid of that jarring repetition-
'You're moving away and I'm standing still
It's strange to stand still'
To hear the same words in such crazily close proximity is as unsettling in the ear of a reader as an off-key chord. Definatly something to avoid.
| Pricilla Grey chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Interesting poem, it's very well written.
- Pricilla Grey