Reviews for Goodbye is the Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! Jaliy!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww.. Cute ending. :D I was wondering if you were gonna write a story for Aiden. That'll be pretty fun to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um ... wow, this is a really great and sweet story! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it! TRENT AND MITCHELL ARE AMAZING! charlotte |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story ] I read the other one too, but then when i saw there was a sequel i just kept on reading and didnt review [[sorry!]] ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() woohoo! great story! i love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh i just love it! :D :D :D i read this in one sitting, the prequel last night. :P heheheh. thanks for the wonderful story! :D :D :D it was so darn cute and so darn awesome! :D :D :D lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i feel so empty. im really going to miss these characters they were developed so well, and the whole story was so.. wow... that i even overlooked the sometimes confusing typos. haha. awesome. i loved this story. and MHN too :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() what happend to skipper? :[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love how this song is so fitting. i liked the lyrics so much i actually [illegally *cough cough*] downloaded it and im listening to it right now :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe...that was a cute story :) Thank you:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just read both Making him notice and goodbye is the beginning, and i have to say that i totally feel in love with your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAhaha she knows her way round threats with him mwahahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... she has the worst luck... shot, stabbed, nearly raped.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I'm a new reader and have hust finished both Making Him Notice, Goodbye is the Beginning, One Night and Our Memories, and thought I'd actually comment instead of being a silent reader. Anyway I loved both your stories and I hope you keep up the good work. |