Reviews for Goodbye is the Beginning |
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Jaden Ink chapter 5 . 7/7/2009 “Well, what are you waiting for? Get your ass up there and get him off of my girlfriend.” Mitchell’s smirk grew wider, “But she isn’t your girlfriend.” hahaha |
Jaden Ink chapter 3 . 7/7/2009 brads a creep |
JustAnotherLibroLover chapter 16 . 7/7/2009 Technically, hasn't Laila seen both of Trent's parents? I remember reading in MHN a sceen where Laila and her mom went out to Applebees for diner and Delia ran up and hugged Laila. Then Laila looked around because she had just came to the realization that Delia was trent's little sis, but all she saw were trent's mom and dad... I think. Eh that's all I've got to say about this story (loves it, by the way! I'm reading it again 'cause it's just too cute :P hee hee!) |
Isabella Western chapter 19 . 6/27/2009 That was beautiful Love xx Izzy xx |
Isabella Western chapter 1 . 6/27/2009 You had me in Tears again |
Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 19 . 5/24/2009 hiya i really liked this story and the first one. Great writing and your writing gets better with every chapter. Keep up the great work. Angel |
samora chapter 19 . 5/24/2009 i think i liked this one even more with the storyline and everything they are obviously moe grown up but we get to hear from trent which is great. so wondering are u having any stories out soon and also i think doing a story on aiden would be pretty good seeing how he deals with stuff. just an idea lol. great story love it. :) |
nevershoutnever chapter 5 . 4/28/2009 didn't danielle's dad die. ? In her like freshman year. ? |
ChelseaAileyah chapter 3 . 4/15/2009 EXTRA Happy that Trent is back and ready to fight for Laila's sweet.! |
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 20 . 4/8/2009 Love this story! I was so heartbroken when i read the prequel...(i forgot what it was called) I'm glad they had kids... twins! |
coloring chapter 19 . 3/16/2009 I really wish you would write a continuation for this story...but it would all be about Trent and Laila kissing (lots of it), blushing, arguing, and having sex. Oh by the way, that part was absolutely hot. It was what I needed. Haha. It was very descriptive. How I love happy endings. :) |
Raynedrop1894 chapter 19 . 3/10/2009 Ok so i just finished reading part one and part two and let me tell you, wow you are good. I really like them! Your like really good at writing and i was just wondering if you would read my story and tell me if it was good or not. I only have one chapter out right now, but im not so sure if its good or not. |
3DarkGoddess3 chapter 19 . 2/26/2009 I'm really glad that they finally got their happily ever after. I noticed that you never posted the story SO ADDICTING to bad it sounded like a good story. |
Erica71167 chapter 19 . 2/20/2009 I just read MHN and this back to back. They are great stories! Usually sequels aren't very good, but you stayed true to the characters and the plot was great! I just wanted to tell you I'm looking forward to reading your other stories. You are a great author. Anyway, great job! |
HelgaBertoni chapter 20 . 2/7/2009 Loved the sequal I rate it a 10 out of a 10. And I have to say that you are defently a great writer. The story really drew me in. Can't wait till you write something new. Anyway I'll be waiting... |