Reviews for Goodbye is the Beginning
gnomie chapter 19 . 8/5/2011
I award this most amazing sequal/series thingy along with Opposites Attract :) lolzzz But i do love thiss- is it published cuz i WILL get my school 2 buy it and put nin the libraries... 14-19 tho LOL
GNOMIE chapter 17 . 8/5/2011
NOW I C WHY IT WAS M-RATED. it starts all nice and calm then BAM *CLAPPING HER HANDS 2GETHER* ITS SO STEAM LOLZ... A 25yr old virgin? Sweet...
GNOMIE chapter 16 . 8/5/2011
He must have seen my distress because he pressed a kiss to the side of my head, and to my astonishment picked up Aiden, and headed toward his mom. I soon found that I was staring at his backside – not that I was complaining – and I didn't know what to do.

Very awkward? Yes.

FAVE PARTS :D
gnomie chapter 13 . 8/4/2011
Lol... I love twinkies 2?
Gnomie chapter 4 . 8/4/2011
Arwh i feel like im gonna cry. Why am i only finding this now after like 5 yrs? -.- HISS!
gnomie chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
WOAH! Just wondering? Does ny1 think brad cud actually rape her... i think brads gonna come back 4 revenge- just sayin :P Team Trent :D
gnomie chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
ur evil nd u made my heart skip a beat with tht last line xx
namesdontmatter chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
I love this story! You are a great writer.
GoNe RoGuE chapter 20 . 7/18/2011
This story was really good though not as good as the second one, but aren't all stories that way? Well anywhoo Laila and Trent are a fantastic couple along with Dani and Mitchell. Your an awesome writer and don't stop even, even if you only write for fun, I know I'm not the only person out there that would like this story)

~Hannah
Alicat05812 chapter 20 . 7/15/2011
I loved this story as much as the first one. I hope that you keep writing and have more stories to put up at one point. You are a fantastic writer.
lovevictim chapter 20 . 7/5/2011
I actually read this before Making him notice, i don't know seeing 'angst' as the genre for the first part made me stay away from it, i'm hardly ever up for sad stories if i know from the beginning it's going to end up with a heart break, but when i finished reading this i just had to go and read that just to see how they ended up together, but anyways i'll reveiw on that story later but first this one ..

I absaloutly adore this story, it made me smile alot. Trent and Laila are just really loveable, i wish love like that existed in real you know, where after six years of seperation it's still as strong as ever. and Aiden aww he's so CUTE, i think that boy deserves a story of his own, when he's all adult, damn he'll make one hot of a hunk, he's already so handsome.

Anyways lovely story, it kept me hooked right from the beginning. And a author who could maintain their audience's attention throughout the story makes a really good author.

Looking forward to more stories from you :)
wakeyourdreamz chapter 20 . 6/30/2011
YES!

SEQUEL? FINISHED.

HAPPPY ENDING? CHECK.

SLEEP? MOST DEFINITELY.

It's 3am. And I LOVED IT. Now I must catch those Z's.

C'est fini. I'm so glum.

Night night.
wakeyourdreamz chapter 3 . 6/30/2011
...my heart is palpitating!
Sing for the Moment chapter 19 . 6/18/2011
I have to say, I was amazed...just this whole story was wonderful, it's not an overused plot like most on FictionPress, the characters seemed real, and most of all, I cried in the very last chapter. I very rarely cry at happy endings; so this is definitely saying something.

Now I know this story was written a couple of years ago, but it still deserves attention, this was brilliant.
kaymuhray chapter 14 . 4/24/2011
OMG!

y does everyone want to rape her

:( sad face

its a lil depressing
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