hi trisha! its me, susie! this poem kicks ass! sort of... spooky. keep it up! and remember... beware the rubber cheesecakes (they're everywhere)

Hmm what to say...I loved this poem and it kinda has a point about lots of people, and know what this poem's going onto my favorites list _

Not to ruin the feeling you get after reading a poem, but paperdolls scare me... great poem, though!

I'm not totally sure on what it's trying to say, but paper dolls isn't something you hear in a poem very often or some kind of phrase. That's what makes this poem unique. I wish there were more poems that were more unique like this one.

(Good job for creativity/originality!)

I enjoyed it, it drew my interest because of the title alone, and I liked what it discussed.

aw... i love the lines

"Now, with hatred in her eyes,

She sits, cutting paper dolls."

excellant job. -Black and White Dreams