Reviews for Giving Up
Brightheart chapter 19 . 7/17/2014
It's a nice story but I wish it had been written/ended differently!
R chapter 3 . 1/12/2014
Your writing is good, but in what world would The Ring and The Village be considered scary? Neither one of them was particularly horrific or even good for that matter...
thatweirdgurl97 chapter 19 . 12/7/2013
You've not been really descriptive of Dylan and Libby's "getting together" or their relationship. As much as i would've liked more information about it, I have to admit I would've been even more pissed off if you made Skylar end up with Libby. Though I did know from the the start that Dylan would be just perfect with her! Due to the non-descriptive part mentioned above, not one of my most favourite stories but I gotta say... One hell of a Story! :)
Icecubefrozen chapter 19 . 11/23/2013
Awwww such a cute ending! :) awesome story
silverbird125 chapter 19 . 2/17/2013
Great story. I read this before I just thought I'd try again. Amazing, I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
brinalovesyouxx chapter 19 . 12/6/2012
Naaww :) such a cute story.. I love it! Another one of your well writeen stories, cant wait to read more! :D xx
AnonymousReads chapter 19 . 11/3/2012
You don't even say what happens with her parents and soccer. Great story. :)
Neverland.dream chapter 19 . 8/13/2012
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! THis is like...just.. *sigh*

I feel like it's a movie or something.

Did I mention that I LOVE Dylan right from the start 'cause he's protective,s weet, funny, kind, and all. Oh, and Tyler's really over protective. So, I probably like him less than Ryan and Eddie. I don't know why I love Eddi so much even though he's rarely mentioned, but he's just so sweet and charming. :)

PLEASE WRITE MORE cliches because I'm a sucker for them. :)

Oh, this story was so well-written by the way. :) LOVE IT!
CrimsonsNight chapter 4 . 8/3/2012
Very intense chapter...who is her love interest?
CrimsonsNight chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
Its beautiful, ireally enjoyed it!
CrimsonsNight chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
I really like the expression! The way you convey emotion is great.
x3xJOJOx3x chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
So I read your story and it's a cool idea. And your able to easily like the characters. Although. I found that I didn't really get to "know" the characters and relate to them easily, not saying every story you read you should be able to relate to them. And I'm not talking about the situation. I'm not making much sense. Anyways.

I don't see a plot. At all. Um. Yea. And I would not consider this a romance story. I would say that it's a friendship story if anything. But back to the plot. Not every story has to follow the plot formula thing but I didn't find anything that would even follow a line of events.

The end was defintly rushed. I don't know if this was intended or u actually felt it but for me myself it almost felt like you were done with the story and just wante it to end. Like you were sick of it.

Anyways this is just my opinion and I do enjoy your writing style, it's fun and quirky. Please do not take any of this offensively if you do read my cmment.

Angelbaby1991 chapter 19 . 4/21/2012
Great Story.
Music Note chapter 18 . 1/26/2012
great story!
Music Note chapter 19 . 1/26/2012
great chapter!
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