Reviews for Giving Up |
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![]() ![]() im really enjoying your story.. it's pretty amusing.. hope you update it soon) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! I love it! I think she'll end up with Skyler, coz Dylan's like her brother, and that would be gross. And it would be a shame to screw up a nice platonic relationship like that. Skyler all the way! heehee -dances-Cheetah-of-lemurs |
![]() ![]() ![]() We! more more I say! Dylan and Libby are good... Hm...But like to get to know more about Skyler... :] |
![]() ![]() hahahaha, funny! i love reading about the good times they have together. please don't make that stop! it's one of the best things about your story. skyler's pretty okay. he's nice. i like him. dylan, is more than okay. but not so romantically. i'm still thinking, lol. definitely no for brandon. brandon is for raquel and it's unrealistic if lib has too much guys going for her. my fave character would be like, dylan or ryan. oh, and i love how they're all completely random and weird and obnoxious. it makes for a very fun read. thanks for a good time ;) |
![]() ![]() hey. great chapter. nice and long. hmm...for a second there i thought dylan was her brother but then realised the gross-ness of your brother saying your hand tastes good and...yeh. lol. cant wait for more. GA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story's awesome! And I have to say I like Dylan... a lot... Don't know why, but I do... ;) Anyway, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() did you really think that was a long review? because to me, thats A LOT shorter than what i usually write, lol. well, anyways, your welcome, times three, since you sort of thanked me a bunch of times. :D hey, being responsible isnt a bad thing... truth is, in my small little group of four or five friends, im the most responsible. -shrugs- but him being responsible isnt the entire reason for me liking him best. its because it seems that ryan's sort of a jerk, and though eddie's nice and all, hes too... shy? no. hes too soft, thats the word. like you said before 'eddie's into the whole feelings thing' that was one of the first chapters, i believe. i think. but yea, taylor's not so much of a jerk, and though hes a bit... obsessive compulsive, hes awesome. him and dylan. like i said before... i repeat myself a lot, sorry. responsible and trustworthy -:-ARE-:- fantastic characteristics, especially for a guy, since you dont exactly get that a lot. did that friend of yours think about that? i think the same of dylan. he might be a little physical, but at least theres no blood with him. yet. ...yyeett. yea, well, although hes insane, i see him as trustworthy, too. probably not as responsible, but still. you know what? i think the reason i like these guys so much more than guys from other stories here on fictionpress is because other guys are WAY too soft and sensitive and caring, and all that. guys in the real world? yea right. but these guys are all realistic. i applaud that. (by the way, i usually end up reading dramas, so that might be why the guys in other stories are all soft and sweet, and surreal...so thats more my fault, i guess. but still.) i dont blame you. for the jumping spider thing, i mean. id probly go and squeal (for some strange reason, my larynx DOES NOT permit me to scream. my voice doesnt go that high... i am a girl, just so you know. so thats weird.) and then run away, coming back with a random fly swatter that came out of nowhere. lord of the rings... i never really liked the movies or the books. so, uhm... yea. haha, my dog's cuter just because hes fat. hes a grown yellow lab, and hes got these FOLDS of fur just cascading fown his face. and when hes sitting on the top step of our staircase, and your at the bottom, and looking up, and all the fat practically covers his eyes, you just gotta laugh. i love my dogs, lol. so, yes, anyways, uhm... the only song that youve got the lyrics for in your chapters that ive heard is bad day by daniel powter. believe me, after this past season of american idol, i know it WELL. i like it, though. well, point is, ill have to check back soon for those links for the songs. id like to hear them. the one by avril lavigne, i mightve heard, but im not so sure. anyways, ill check back when you update next. by the way, this chapter wasnt boring at all. the whole OCD thing was funny. at least i think so. and for some reason, though youd think it was really nothing and maybe even a bit annoying, the dylan-trying-to-make-libby-come-out-of-the-bathroom-thing was funny. -shrugs- okay, im gonna go now. -smiles- keep on writing ~~MWR-::- |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story. keep writing. very very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I can't think of anything else to really say... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey there! it was anther great chapter and can't wait to read more. so is she going to either end up with Skyler or Dylan? Hmm... ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OCD? Haha just like The Art of Hating! :D real funny chappie, great one as usual! I sent you back a reply anyway, thanks for your suggestions! Oh and I LOVE The Veronicas, Leave Me Alone is one of my favs... nah, actually all of their songs are my favs, they're just so FAB! Haha yes I did think that Skyler sounds kinda girly, but then his character makes up for it yeah? x) Ok, I have to go, I need to sleep early to catch the World Cup tomorrow morning... 2am, urgh... bye! (update soon!) |
![]() ![]() hey i like this chapter, but your authors note is like longer than your whole chapter idiot! your so weird! |
![]() ![]() hey, I really liked this story...very nice...Keep writing it. L8er. |